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I will kill you, desu by =Havanese:iconHavanese:


©2009 =Havanese
:iconhavanese:

Artist's Comments

I'm gonna use this image for a tutorial :) Critique would be very much appreciated! So are comments, of course!

Edit: changed file, I like it much better now

Critiques


:iconmafiee:
I love you unique style and the shine makes the character glow. I really love your choice of colors and how you put the shines in a place that isn't so awkward.


Although there are some quirks. There isn't ENOUGH shading. The dress has no shading but the tiny bump the shows the breast. I think the hair needs a little bit more shading as well.

The background is a bit bear but i guess since it's for a tutorial it's an acception.

Maybe you should change the facial expression through out all your pictures. I see that face too many times.

beautiful job on this though. i admire you sooo much
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:iconkaitlynuchiha:
so adorable!

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Until that horrible day comes when a zombie apocalypse occurs,it's our job to use those zombie slaying games that we play as combat simulating tools on how to survive (unless someone passes out shot guns, Were not gonna chance it though)
:iconhavanese:
Thank you very much :)
:iconcrafxter:
Wait, shes on a killing pose? Still perfect and cute :3

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"Rock is Overpowered, Paper is fine" -Scissors ಠ_ಠ
:iconhavanese:
Heh, no, the title is tongue-in-cheek. =P She's just doing the cat "nyah" sort of pose.

And thank you very much. :)
:iconlinkshot:
Far too cute to be scary :3

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~Speed of Magic~

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